All the while me and my wife Jane
Had dream’t of flying to far off Spain
tickets we did not obtain in any plane
She asked how the dream would sustain
I told her we could always get a train
that passed through the terrain of Spain
We had barely got into a crowded train
when it started to mighty heavily rain
having the crowd seeming so insane
only one person Jane, she looked sane.
When I started looking at her again
she seemed to be in some sort of pain
efforts to reach to her were all in vain
when, of a sudden, our train hit a crane
that somehow got stuck in wet terrain.
We seemed to lose contents of our brain
comforting, as in, no gain without pain,
could you tell, amid tears, are we in Spain?
the strain was much, though, to ascertain
we looked like people hit with dirt cocaine
though in our plan was, old Champagne…
P.S
This poem came to me with the recent rains in Bahrain.
Perceptions 
Beautifully expressed!
Thank you Purva
Nice! Rains bring out the best of rhymes at times 🙂
Thanks Pragalbha. Yes…they surely do..
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Thank you V.P
It is raining rhymes here! Good one, Sunith!
Thank you Pranitha
Ha ha this is a cool one. Ot reminds me of days when I used to work hard on finding rhyming words. You have listed quite a few. Enjoyed this write.
Thanks, yes it came out well in the end.
Nice rhythm..good that it rained.
Thanks Akhila, yes.
My cousin shared a few snaps.. Its really heavy rain.. Are you there sunith..
Yes, in Bahrain. the rain was for 2 days. Now it is clear.
Oh..ok
Lovely. Thanks much too for the relieving us readers of worrying that this actually happened to you
It was just fun with words daAL. Thanks.
Very nice! Heard it was snowing too in the Middle East.
Yes, it snowed in the mountains of the UAE. Thanks.
Beautiful 🙂
Thank you Sumi
I love how the rhythm fits perfectly and each couplet amazingly placed 🙂
Thank you. I like rhyming ones.
Nice rhyming poem.
Thanks Winnie
You’re welcome Sunith