Vishal had lost again the race
He could not keep the pace
This time too he lost the case
About winning the silver vase
All this had left him in a daze.
He decided to set out to a place
Seeking a guide, peace and solace
He reached a wooded green space
Where he met a coach named Grace
Who taught him well how to pace…
Wow awesome poem, Sunith and he sure met a man who had grace and mercy.
Thank you Kamal π
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Excellent.
Thank you Rupali
Wow. And you managed to stick to the rhyming scheme too. That’s beautiful written, sir. β€οΈ
Thank you for for reading Shweta π
The pleasure is all mine. π
Well written verse π
Thanks for compliments π
just completed your rhyme!
Awesome play of words ππ
Thank you Krishna π
Lovely
Thanks Adi
Inspiring message
Thank you
Great adherence to rhyme!
Thank you π
Liked your short story with nice rhyming scheme.
Thank you π
A very beautiful rhythmic poetry….Excellent.ππ
Thank you for the kind compliment
Swagat apka.
LOVE THIS! β¦ thanks for the recent follow as well! π
Thank you. Glad to follow.
That’s beautifully penned, sir.